Only Knew

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Friday, 12-Jun-2009 10:15:34

She’s just a girl,
Sitting all by herself.
Not thinking of what could come along.
He’s just a boy,
Who wishes he could tell her.
That she doesn’t have to be alone.

Chorus:
Why is it so hard to say what’s on my mind?
The feelings I have, but the words are undefined.
Why can’t you see that I’m all you need?
Maybe you notice, but my signals you’d rather not read.
When will I be able to confess?
The words of love that are so hard to express.
Baby if you only knew,
Then I could pull through.

She’s just a girl,
With a broken heart.
Only thinking of what could have been.
He’s just a boy,
Who knew from the start.
That this love would never end.

Chorus:
Why is it so hard to say what’s on my mind?
The feelings I have, but the words are undefined.
Why can’t you see that I’m all you need?
Maybe you notice, but my signals you’d rather not read.
When will I be able to confess?
The words of love that are so hard to express.
Baby if you only knew,
Then I could pull through.

Bridge:
She’s just a girl,
Who could finally see.
How much his feelings mean.
He’s just a boy,
Who finally knows.
How much this love could really grow.

Chorus:
Why is it so hard to say what’s on my mind?
The feelings I have, but the words are undefined.
Why can’t you see that I’m all you need?
Maybe you notice, but my signals you’d rather not read.
When will I be able to confess?
The words of love that are so hard to express.
Baby if you only knew,
Then I could pull through.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Friday, 12-Jun-2009 11:26:50

Jess, well done as usual. I could totally feel the sense of loneliness at the beginning of the song. Then in the chorus, I could feel the longing to express feeling, but the inability to verbalize it. Good job!

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 18:55:40

Did you write that yourself? Wow! I love it! I've been there, done that.

Post 4 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Sunday, 14-Jun-2009 17:07:00

Hey, good job with your song. It seems like there's a story behind the song. I agree with the previous poster.

Post 5 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Sunday, 14-Jun-2009 17:29:00

great job girl; love it!

Post 6 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Sunday, 14-Jun-2009 19:03:45

Thanks guys, yes I did write the song

Post 7 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Monday, 15-Jun-2009 11:53:18

Dam! That's awesome! Keep it up!